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BlOoD TiEs
Junior Member
since 1999-10-02
Posts 30
New York City

0 posted 1999-11-26 12:44 PM


Sometimes they act like they don't have a heart
Their words hit me like a knife and tear me apart

I hear them in my dreams, they drive me insane
I wish I was never born as I curse my own name

I see only one way out that I am destined to choose
They always told me that all I will do is lose

With all their words, they make me feel so low
My heart turns cold, as hate is the only emotion I know

I lose again, they have dealt a deadly blow
Go to hell they say and so I go
to where my hate is doomed to GROW

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Dont bet on fast horses, bet on slow rabits.

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kari
Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
1 posted 1999-11-26 01:10 AM


Your misery makes me want to cry. I hope that you are all right.
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
2 posted 1999-11-26 02:57 AM


I know how you feel... but you can't let your hate for a few consume all that you are. It's a terrible thing when you can't love anything else for all your hate. Just hang in there and hope that it all gets better soon. A very good poem, but I hate to see someone have to write about things like this.
April

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...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...


Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-26 10:40 AM


I would like to offer an ear for you. I am a parent and I can't fathom a parent hurting their child like this. I know it does happen and I hate that. Please, if you need to talk to someone who does care, contact me.
Krut
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A
4 posted 1999-11-26 03:01 PM


i think we all feel like this...please if ure this sad...talk to someone...there is always someone who cares....even if you dont think they do..they do... ure life is worth alot... trust me...its what u do with it...that counts..
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