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lostprincess New Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 6dalton ma us |
the sky falls and drakness becomes my world this is the place i've grown to love everyone fears hides in the light but it's beauty takes away my last breath i'm content i savor the moment of silence and take comfort that i'm alone able to be what has been locked inside here in the safty of the darkness i finally found one place i can be me |
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Amy J. Renz Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26Newark, NJ, USA |
You're poem sounds so sad and familiar. You can always be yourself, it is just that the world tends to not feel the same way. Do not fall into the trap of feeling like you have to be someone you are not. If I knew you, you could be yourself with me. Sorry, this is so long, but you really struck a nerve with this one. I hope you can find hope, lost princess. ------------------ I am an acquired taste, I'm anchovies. Not everyone likes those hairy little things. Tori Amos |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. My question to you is this. Are you hiding from the light in this darkness? It is great that you have found a place you can feel safe as long as you are not running from something.  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I REALLY relate to this. I mean, people are not always going to accept you for who you are, and you may be someone GREAT! But don't let that get you down. I try not to. And often in the darkness, I find that when no one can see, everything can be better in a way. Sorry so much! But I do know the feeling. |
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