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Best Friend Suicide |
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Love2party New Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 1 |
The decisions were so hard All the pain he couldnt stand A look of fear in his eyes And a gun in his hand It was his way out Of this world of hate and sadness The only way he knew To escape all this madness News of his death spread quickly And many tears were shed that day No one knew, that this pain, Was yet to go away The next week at school, A rumor was walking around Telling everyone his best friend had done it That the pain got him too far down After the funeral, His hundreds of friends all in tears after saying their last goodbyes to their buddy They had loved all these years Why did they do it? Why did they die? I am not sure I wish I knew why All i know is today They are missed a whole lot And Jason and Sean We all loved you, just in the process of telling you, we forogt. Sorry guys this isnt a very good one, i just made it in remmeberance of Sean Forren (1982-10-8-99) and Jason Pfefferly (1982-10-19-99) BFF We miss you |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
im so sorry this is good venue for your emotions i cant imagine how it must feel for you, but my prayers are with you my dear... ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
I wont even tryto say that I understand your pain of losing two freinds, but I will say that I hope everything gets better for all who lost them. Star fairy was right, this is a great way to express how you feel, and all of us are here to listen and help whenever you need anything.... ------------------ ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is so sad...it is always hard to lose a person you care for. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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BraTt Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 41Yakima, WA United States |
Oh my gosh, I know exactly how you feel. I love this poem so much. When I read it, I started crying. In fact, I'm still crying. I don't know if you read my peom, it's called "Chase Jackson" He jumped over a bridge in September. Ever since then, I've cried myself to sleep every night. I miss him SO much I can't even explain it. That was such a beautiful poem. Do you mind if I put it in our school annual. They are asking for poems in Chase' memory, or in memory of any else that has committed suicide. If not, I understand. But I just wanted to respond to this to let you know I know how you feel, and if you need anyone to talk to, e-mail me or IM me at SwtHrtAsh, or HevnlyAngelStarz. Take Care, and hang in there. Luv, Ashly |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'm so sorry, Love2party--I can't imagine losing one person in this way, let alone two. My prayers are with you all. Love, ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Do you really want to help the people you care for, while building a lasting memorial to your friends?? A bunch of y'all need to get together, and start a pilot program against violence, and teen suicide at your school, this tradigity doesn't need to happen again, and again, as it is played out all over this country, stand up, and be heard go to your teachers, guidence councelers, and your principal!!! too many of our babies, our tomorrow is dieing, I know I have a 13 year old son,It would kill me if he died!!!!! |
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Tina TT Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45Victoria, Australia |
Beautiful...so sad too  My sympathies ------------------ ~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~ |
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