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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-31 12:37 PM


I must confess
I’m blessed with sorrow
As cupid’s arrow
Hit my chest
It fell apart
(No not my heart--
The cupid’s arrow)

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
1 posted 1999-10-31 01:43 AM


I like that... really short and to the point (as opposed to some of mine that go on and on!) So sad tho....;Þ
I wanna hear more!!!!!

Master
Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-10-31 11:10 AM


Hey April, I must confess, I also have those long ones. This one is a rare exception! Thanks
Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 1999-10-31 05:42 PM


i like this.. a lot .. good job!

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