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Craziness in Letting Go
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Craziness in Letting Go |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
bombardment of crazy situations dying from all the hits i'm takin emotions on overload, smiles i'm fakin slowly chippin away at my unstable foundation indecent memories takin the best of me reliving dreams due to lack of energy holding in tears i won't let you see cuz even still, dont want you worryin bout me my heart in constant pain from deceiving black and bluee bruises throbbing swollen cuts spontaneously bleeding but covered by bandaids for temporary healing but i'll never heal or get over it dont have the strength to take the hits goin insane, experiencing crazy fits sanity escaping like a guilty bandit... ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Star Fairy: I am confused about this poem. When you first mentioned taking hits, I thought you were talking about drugs. But when you spoke of the bruises and cuts, I thought maybe you meant fighting? Or hurting yourself? Could you please explain? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
the hits... they are emotional hits.. all the old sweet memories hit me outta the blue... cutz and bleeding... did you read the Cutter's Song... i can relate to that... ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I see now. If you really are cutting on yourself, although I understand, you need to stop. If not for you, then for the people that love you. Because if you can stop for them, then maybe, eventually, you will be happy you did stop. Thats what I'm trying to do now. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Star Fairy 2, I can completely relate to your poem because i too have the "cutting trouble" and i know its not good but i still do it...i dont know how else to cope...but i'm glad to see that i'm not the only one experiencing it...good poem! keep em coming! starboards  |
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