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April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 1999-10-18 02:44 AM

Little fragile girl,
turned a woman by the touch of a boy.
That same boy
grew and changed with the love of that girl.
As but children
just a prelude to what was planned for them so soon.

Years fly past,
again they meet as children
but now fate runs strong within them
A single glance
barely a touch
and love turns souls to flames.
Love grows strong,
as do they
time and time love is tested.
When will the day dawn
when their love is free to shine,
like light spilling through the fingers
of those who keet it hidden for such eternity?
How can the wind
wild, untamed, free,
be held and hidden from those who desire most to feel its coolness, smell its sweet aroma, and marvel at its silent strength?
Still more wild and free
is love.
Struggling to be let free,known well to any soul that would listen
waiting for the day when the world will
simmering in their hearts forever.
know of love as strong as time.

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 1999-10-18 10:56 AM

I really loved that poem, the creativity that also rings, oh, too true... YOu are truly talented, that poem touched me really deep, you are so talented, keep up the good work.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Shasta
Junior Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 24
st augustine florida

2 posted 1999-10-18 05:10 PM

It reall hit home.
YOur have a true writters soul keep it up

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You onnly have one llife, Think about it

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-18 06:13 PM

Beautiful poem....looking forward to more form you

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-10-18 07:47 PM

Very beautiful.....Ihave to say. This touched me deeply. A true work from the heart.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

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