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Shasta
Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24
st augustine florida

0 posted 1999-10-18 05:14 PM


My, Your love is it false?
I cant tell why we are this way. You there, Me here.
the pain cuts my heart as i bleed deep tears, I cry for you.

Tell me how we got this way.
what happen to the fountian that flowed in your soul.

That deep pastion we use to hold in our hands of fate.
Do you miss it?

I think i still Love you, crave for you.

Do you miss me?

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You onnly have one llife, Think about it

© Copyright 1999 Shasta - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-18 06:11 PM


Sad poem, Shasta...I hope everything works out.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-10-18 07:52 PM


Shasta....I really enjoyed this one. So much meaning is portrayed

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

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