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PaintGirl
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since 1999-08-12
Posts 4
Niceville, FL USA

0 posted 1999-10-04 09:09 PM


I wrote this poem about my best friend. She's saved my life, in more ways than one. Please tell me what you think

KATIE

I used to be lost
With no hope at all
I was constantly beat down
Every day I would fall.

But then you came along
And helped me through my past
I couldn't ask for more than you
I have a friend at last.

Friends come and go
They're scattered to the wind
But you're different than them
You, I find strength in.

I'd walk a thousand miles for you
I'd give my last breath away
Everything you are to me
Is worth more than my dying day.

I love you more than life itself
So much is hard to say
If God gave me a precious gift
It's you in every way.

© Copyright 1999 PaintGirl - All Rights Reserved
kari
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since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
1 posted 1999-10-04 11:50 PM


that is way good. it really shows how much you care for her. i hope she has read it. awesome.
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