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kari
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since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 1999-10-03 08:53 PM


This is actually a song that I wrote on the guitar, but I think that all songs are a poem in themselves, so here it goes...


I am lost in mind.
It is you I can't find.
You played your game so un-true.
I rode along without a clue.
You didn't think what the future would bring.
Now I am gone, I was just a fling.

(pre-chorus)
How I wish that you were mine.
Hey boy you are so fine.
You are everything I see.
That's how much you mean to me.
In one second you were gone and I...
was wrong.

(chorus)
Let's make it simple you said 'hi' then you said 'bye.'
You left me standing there; standing there to cry.
Let's make it simple you said 'hi' then you said 'bye.'
You left me in my thoughts wondering why.

Is it her that you desire?
When it comes down to the wire.
The chances came and they were took.
But in the end my emotions were shook.
Is it my feelings that forget?
Or that blond girl that you just met?

(pre-chorus)
(chorus)

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Lauren
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 21
FORT PIERCE ,FL
1 posted 1999-10-04 02:51 PM


hey! i think thats a really great poem/song sounds almost like my position..well okie im out! good poem! bye!
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