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Mike
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0 posted 11-05-1999 03:06 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

As I drift alone within this crowded room,
I float in isolation, foregoing contemplation,
Unfettered by reflections that entomb.

Amongst the mindless valleys I do soar,
On feathered wings of hawk, I hear the mountains talk,
Calling out in introspection I implore.

Escape from cloistered prisons of the mind,
Adrift upon the wind, across the sky I wend,
Free at last from formless shackles that do bind.

Fears of strife that no more loom,
For I sought my soul to free, I found serenity,
Unfettered by reflections that entomb.

For I sought my soul to free, I found serenity,
Upon the tranquil sea, I found ubiquity.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-05-1999).]
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Denise
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1 posted 11-05-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Mike this is so lovely! It gave me a smooth peaceful feeling! Great job!

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2 posted 11-05-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Mike this is wonderful!!!! I simply love it.

PS: please don't take Denise from me with your wonderful words!!!!

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Robert- Not to worry-I have room for EVERYBODY'S wonderful words!

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Denise

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4 posted 11-05-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Simply lovely!

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smooth!
 
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