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Open Poetry #3

Bonfire

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-11-05 07:08 PM

Bonfire

Inside of my soul
fueled by the kindling
of emotion
ringed by the stones
of conscience
burns the bonfire
of thought
with the ever present danger
of escaping the circle
into the undergrowth
of my life.

RobertB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-05 07:19 PM

Yep! There is always that danger! Very good!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-11-05 08:57 PM

You know your work really leaves me in wonder. It is so mixed and leaves one with many, many ways of interpretation. As I told you very unique. What amazes me the most as this just "comes" to you! WOW!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 1999-11-05 09:04 PM

The symbolism in this one is great. Well done!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-05 09:20 PM

Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-25 09:16 PM

I know how that is...had it happen many times

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