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Hello God.... It's Me, Lucie

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Lucie
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0 posted 10-29-1999 02:21 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I sat at home and wondered
about all the troubles I have met.
God gave me a book of instructions,
(I just havenít read it yet.)

I say my prayers all the time.
(Each time a bill comes in.)
I am the perfect Christian.
(Except for when I sin.)

I sit in church on Sunday.
(At least three times a year.)
I spread his words "God Bless You"
(For every sneeze I hear.)

Iím having such a hard time.
I wonder where Godís been?
Maybe heís been waiting
for me to come to him.


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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 10-29-1999 02:34 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful job, and true for a lot of people, myself included I'm sad to say. Thanks for sharing it with us all

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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2 posted 10-29-1999 03:03 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ah, Lucie,
It's amazing what we go through sometimes just to come to this realization. Very good.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Watcher666
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3 posted 10-29-1999 03:05 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done.Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-29-1999 12:19 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lucie, what a wonderful expression. WOuld you mind if I sent this to my pastor, she'd love it!
Julie
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6 posted 10-29-1999 12:26 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Lucie, liked your poem.

When your spirit is weak,
ask someone else to speak
in sponsorship of you,
and He'll send angels too.
Marilyn
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7 posted 10-29-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Your words ring very true Lucie.
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8 posted 10-29-1999 03:00 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

hello Lucie...it's me...God....LOL....this was superb young lady...and I hope all your prayers are answered sweets...You are a truly talented, big hearted, fine gal.....and I think about you frequently.....Luvya..toe
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9 posted 10-29-1999 03:11 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lucie: This is wonderful!!!
Lucie
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10 posted 10-29-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you all for your replies.

Hoot I would be honored if you shared this.

Toe I think about ya too.
Pepper
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11 posted 10-29-1999 05:07 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I agree with Hoot, Lucie. What wonderful expression!



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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Andrew Scott
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12 posted 10-29-1999 05:16 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lucie: Echos of all the above... good job. Speaks loads about a good portion of our society and it's willingness to take, but hardly ever give... to have it handed over rather than to work for it. Just my take... hope you're doing well.

General Andrew
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13 posted 10-29-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

How true this is and how well you expressed it. Loved it. : )
hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 10-29-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lucie, much thanks, I'm sure she will love it as much as I did
Denise
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15 posted 10-29-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Love it Lucie! Very good!

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Denise

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16 posted 10-29-1999 08:26 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

And in this corner, winner and still champ.....it's you, Lucie.
WhtDove
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17 posted 10-29-1999 08:29 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Lucie this was terrific. If you don't mind me saying I think He is waiting for you to come to him. God bless ya, what a work of art you wrote, I just LOVED IT!
poetFemmeFatale
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18 posted 10-29-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

hehe Dear sweet Lucie...this made me laugh - but at least you're honest!! LOL I know, it's not funny, but it's comical through your eyes, cause I know you're a great clown. Sometimes, the best way to get through the hard times is to try and laugh your way through 'em! Remember that poem of mine titled, "Toilet Bowl of Lies"...my soul was tearing inside when I wrote that, but after doing so, and laughing at what I'd written, it seemed to keep me sane, and I didn't "hurt" anybody! LOL Keep your chin up girl, you're almost there!!!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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