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what is lost in me

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Iloveit
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0 posted 10-28-1999 12:33 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

inside the circle of your arms
I feel protected and loved
you are my safe place to be.
a wondrous creation
this realm of energy and warmth
wherein I regain what is lost in me.
my face buried deep
in the beating of your heart,
breathing as one,
your strength renews me.
what amazes and saddens me too,
I must say,
is that this you do
from miles away.
how could I have known that
the puzzle pieces of me
scattered by this race
we call humanity
would all be waiting safely
inside the circle of your arms?

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1999 Iloveit




[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 10-28-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 10-28-1999 12:37 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This makes me sigh, Lovey... those miles between the pieces of the whole are tough. Well done!!!
Iloveit
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2 posted 10-28-1999 12:44 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well join my sighs with yours.....thanks suthern
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3 posted 10-28-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Can a Rainbow add her sighs to yours?..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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4 posted 10-28-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep, *sigh* sure can and hugs are welcome too!
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5 posted 10-28-1999 03:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, try this on for sighs...me, too!

The emotion is beautiful.
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6 posted 10-28-1999 03:52 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno?....I'd love to try to get "lost" IN you!!!!
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7 posted 10-28-1999 03:57 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Yanno... as soon as I saw the title, I immediately thought of Toe. *G* I bet you planned it that way, didn't you, ya sneaky O&O????? Don't think I'm not watching closely... (baseball bat swinging back and forth, foot tapping) *G*
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8 posted 10-28-1999 04:18 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep Balladeer, join in the sighs, seems they abound lately, thanks for the compliment

and toe, I am not sure I that's exactly what my poem was trying to say, but I do like your sentiment

and suthern, hey I am not worried, am pretty quick on my feet....lol and I *never* thought of that with the title, lol, shows where your mind is huh?
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9 posted 10-28-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

K, from what I hear, it's easy for Toe to get lost....poor little feller.
Iloveit
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10 posted 10-28-1999 05:08 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ROFG@poor little feller....you two crack me up
Watcher666
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11 posted 10-28-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Simply lovely..*sighs*

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 10-28-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

can I join the crowd and *sigh* too ?
Isis
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13 posted 10-28-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Me too, me too! I want to *sigh* as well.
Lovely piece

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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14 posted 10-28-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful piece of writing, lloveit! I enjoyed it very much!

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Denise

Iloveit
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15 posted 11-01-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks all, am sorry to make you all sigh so much *s* but yes all here know this feeling all too well....
WhtDove
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16 posted 11-01-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

You get a BIG sigh from me. Wonderful emotions you have written here!
Alwye
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17 posted 11-01-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Another big *sigh* to add to the list...beautiful beautiful work...

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

JTF
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18 posted 11-02-1999 04:18 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

A perfect illustration of why this board is called Passions ... Great one lovey ! ...

ps : I really tried but couldn't find any typo *g*
Iloveit
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19 posted 11-02-1999 09:32 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

JTF lolol@typo, and you do notice it has been edited? I almost left you one, but fixed it instead *g* hugs, good to see you back

thanks Alwye and Whtdove glad you liked it
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where have you gone?
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