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Inside Out (A Villanelle)

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Nan
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0 posted 10-14-1999 08:00 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

With passion born of words alone,
A kindled bond's aforesaid rare.
When love from inside out has grown,

Erotic nuance ne'er outshone.
Clandestine musings freely share,
With passion born of words alone.

Allure endued as pheromone,
In spirit lustful hearts declare
When love from inside out has grown.

With bated breath a bond has sown
Intrinsic trust beyond compare
With passion born of words alone.

True intimacy's surely known.
No greater love ~ No small affair
When love from inside out has grown.

An ecstasy as yet unknown
Enjoins a once unseemly pair
With passion born of words alone,
When love from inside out has grown.



© Copyright 1999 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 10-14-1999 08:29 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

From forth thy lips flow the songs of Erato.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 10-14-1999 08:52 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
A very touching lesson, enjoyable read and wonderful construction. Thank you *L*
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Excellent...but you knew that
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4 posted 10-14-1999 09:16 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Wow! Isn't love like that rare? It is indeed a gift Nan m'dear! Very beautiful poem! (Eyeing your meter jealously LOL)

*hugs*
Izzzzzzzzy

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5 posted 10-14-1999 09:17 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

What's a pheromone? Guess I'll have to look it up, huh? (There's one in every class, she thinks) hehehe

Fabulous, Nan! Love it!!

Some of the lines, are especially effective... "Erotic nuance ne'er outshone", "Intrinsic trust beyond compare", "An ecstasy as yet unknown".

Excellent!
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yep, you captured it perfectly...really wonderful

nan, just wanted to add here, cause the poetry workshop is not available, that I am really enjoying all the poems from your class, they are all great

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Nan
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Thanks everyone....
Who wants to do the pantoum now???
Denise
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As usual, Nan, perfection! And love those little 'kisses'!

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To convey what must be said , or dump what's in your head . Which-ever way you do it ,
your talent will improve it.
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10 posted 10-15-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

Nan...this was very heartfelt...i loved it!!! Ihave really learnd alot being in here...thank you...you are a GREAT_TEACHER!!!



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Paula Diane S.
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Nan...this was very heartfelt...i
loved it!!! I am learning a lot by
being in here...thank you...you are
a GREAT_TEACHER!!!




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Paula Diane S.
RobertB
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Bravo Nan!!! Bravo!!! Please don't come to close...I have pheromones oooooozing out all over me!!!! hehehehe

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I'm in awe of your talent Dear Lady! Excellent!

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Nan, as usual, beautiful. A rare and wonderful talent do you have SexiNess

Alicat
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Inspiring and beautiful.

Alison
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Indeed a wonderful poem. On LOVE and PASSION
enjoyed.
 
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