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Silence Within

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karenstoltz
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SILENCE WITHIN


IN THE SILENCE OF WITHIN I WAIT FOR SOMETHING
SITTING AND WAITING FOR THE VOICE OF YOU
BREAKING THE SILENCE AND GIVING ME SOMETHING NEW
I REMEMBER YOU AND NOW THERE IS NOTHING


IN THE SILENCE OF WITHIN I SAW HIM AGAIN
STANDING UP AND WALKING AND THEN I HEAR HIS VOICE
HE CHANGED AND I CHANGED AND NOW THE SILENCE IS MY CHOICE
WITHIN THE SILENCE IS WAITING FOR A VOICE WITHOUT PAIN


IN THE SILENCE OF WITHIN I AM SCARED AND I NEED SOMEBODY TO PROTECT ME
IN THE SILENCE OF WITHIN I HIDE AND WAIT FOR SOMEBODY WHO CAN REACH ME

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Severn
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Very touching. I like the shift from 'you' to 'him'.
karenstoltz
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Thank you for the reply.

The struggle always seems to come from inside.
WhtDove
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I agree, this was touching. Good job.
karenstoltz
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Thank you.
I am glad you liked it.
 
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