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Fluffnstuff
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 6
Toronto ON CANADA

0 posted 1999-07-20 04:39 PM


Another try for happiness
Another wasted effort
Am I destined to live life like this
Feeling so alone, so helpless?


What am I to do
When noone wants to love me
I try to do all I can
But my efforts go unnoticed.


A life of emptiness, lonelines, despair
That's all that is left for me
I guess I deserve this
For whatever the reason.


Wish I could just walk away
From all the pain I feel
Run run run, 'till there's nothing
Left that's real.


I am not a coward
I will not give in
Just pretending my heart's not broken
And wish to find comfort... from within.


I have no tears left
I have cried myself dry
Only emptiness remains inside
Emptiness, and pain.


Why must I feel this way
So poor from life, I guess
This is why I was put on this earth
To always be depressed.


Suicide isn't the answer
Although I wish it was
I probably wouldn't do it right
And be even worse off.


Don't pity me
I don't deserve it
this must just be
How my life is meant to be......


© Copyright 1999 Fluffnstuff - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-07-20 05:15 PM


wow.........it's like you were describing me.............I love it! Write more, please.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-20 07:10 PM


i am touched Fluff, just remember: love yourself, and your heart shall never be broken

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours ...devotion...Master...apart...


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