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Aspire New Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 3Canada |
This is just something I have been kicking around in my head and I kind of wondered what anyone else might think of it. I really some of the stuff I have read on this wonderful site. +++ Lost, but not Forgotten Once there was a time, When every sight, seen, brought with it a vision of you. When every sound, heard, was my name spoken on your lips. When every breath, taken, carried sweet thoughts of you to my heart. And I, wrongly, though I would never be sad again. Now there is a time, When every sight, seen, a vision ugly for your absence. When every sound, heard, is another man's name on your lips. When every breath, taken, brings no sweet relief to my torn heart. And I, wrongly, think I will never be happy again. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Welcome, Aspire. I like this one, and the flow is nice. I'll be looking for more from you. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...what more can I say! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
very interesting format...welcome  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours ...devotion...Master...apart... |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Welcome, Aspire. I like this very much. I'll be looking for more of your work |
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