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DarkAngel
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since 1999-07-19
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brick,NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-07-19 08:54 PM



I dream, dreams, and dream one day I will fulfill them.
My dreams are fragile as glass.
They need to be cared for and handled gentle.
Now days it is hard to protect my dreams.
The biggest mistake I ever made was letting people into my dreams.
The only thing these people wanted was to tear down my dreams, and that they did.
They broke that glass, my dreams now lying on the floor shattered.
I am on the floor now picking up the pieces, trying to rescue my shattered dreams.
I pray that one-day I will fulfill my dreams, and everything will be ok

© Copyright 1999 DarkAngel - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-07-19 09:01 PM


This poem moved me......I would like to speak with you..........if you have ICQ, mu #is 37883249 or Instant message, under Saxoness. please contact me.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Rita
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540
2 posted 1999-07-19 09:03 PM


you really need to meet new people......sad poem.....: ( i hope your dream comes true!
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-07-20 01:07 AM


Very sad, but a wonderful job none the less. I like this one.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*



Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
USA
4 posted 1999-07-30 12:42 PM


This is a sad yet lovely poem.

just thought i'd bring some oldies to the top!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*


angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
5 posted 1999-07-30 05:16 AM


i know what you mean by shattered dreams and picking up the pieces. i have just begun to pick up my pieces.
good luck,
angle girl

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-07-30 11:00 AM


Never, never give up on your dreams, sometimes that is the only thing we have left in this world.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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