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Feeling Lost and Alone

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 07-17-99 04:49 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Feeling Lost and Alone

Feeling lost and alone
if only I could hear the telephone.
All I need is a minute of your time
if you can reach in and spare a dime.
Why yes, a quarter now is the fee
to let your strong fingers dial me.

Feeling lost and alone
I can hear the dull sounding dial tone.
Wanting to desperately call you,
but your on the tar paved road
carrying a mechanically heavy load.
All I can do is wait for you
as I patiently try to do.
You are a vital part of me,
and when long distance is the fee
my aching heart sends sadness
to my brain to react as loneliness.

Feeling lost and alone,
but now your tender voice I can clone.
Not a live version of the man I love,
but one that holds the raging tide,
till I can reunite with my everlasting love,
and from then on together we will ride.


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Dragon
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1 posted 07-17-99 06:05 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Is there anything worse than waiting? Beautiful verse.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-17-99 10:52 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I understand where you're coming from here!
tulip
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I also, too well, understand this one!
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 07-18-99 10:16 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Thanks for the comments. He is due home today so my wait will be over.
~one voice~
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5 posted 07-18-99 10:34 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Glad he's coming home today, Lost Dreamer! And I'm glad I'm not the only one feeling alone right now. Thanks for sharing!
~one voice~
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6 posted 07-18-99 03:29 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

~one voice~,
Thank-You, and I hope you are not lonely for too long. The really hard part of him being gone this weekend was the tragedy the Kennedy's were going through, somehow it made me miss him even more.
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