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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Love is in the air, I can not breathe Love has hit everyone, Im in a padded cell If love is a bird, then I am a hidden worm If love can be seen then I am blind ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Too true, much too true. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to our hallowed walls, Gentle Soul - and if you're gonna be a worm, at least be a cute one...  |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
heheh thats cute! ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like this one yuh love is that way |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
It's not until the heart is effected that we are truly blind.Yours is wide open. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
yes.. my heart is open to love.. but I feel like I cant see love.. as if it excludes me but Im ok now..  Im gettin happier.. thanks to all the ppl here cheering me up------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I told you, that what you wanted, needed, was here. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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quote99 Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 17US |
This is awfully deep. I got lost a little in the meter on the second line. Maybe i will read it again later. There is so much poetry here to read and digest! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Deep is my life.. I was in it deep... now Im deep in whereever Im at.. actually Im kinda in the quagmire of depression and content at the same time.. confusing eh? hmmm... hehe |
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