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Please tell me what you think... A Dream

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Rick2
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since 07-08-99
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Hastings Ne USA


0 posted 07-08-99 04:13 PM       View Profile for Rick2   Email Rick2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rick2

A Dream

I can have you in my dreams
and so I choose to sleep
I can hold you, and caress you
knowing you are mine to keep

and when your lips touch mine
I can feel your deep desire
yes, in my deepest slumber
I am consumed by your fire

as breathless whispers of love
are muffled by our sighs
the dreamer can no longer deny
and the passion intensifies

while emotions feed my soul
and our hearts beat in perfect time
our bodies speak a language
compared only to sublime

as I awaken from my dream
my spirit is content
for though only in my slumber
with you... my love was spent.

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Issac

Remember always love today for tomorrow may never come.
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-08-99 04:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I liked it a lot Rick. It was soft and sweet like how we feel just waking up from a really good dream. Welcome to the family. I look forward to more from you!
Rick2
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2 posted 07-08-99 04:20 PM       View Profile for Rick2   Email Rick2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rick2

I am new to the Passions of Poetry and this is my first post I hope I make alot of friends and recieve alot of criticism good and bad

Thank you to all who read and comment too.
Balladeer
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3 posted 07-08-99 04:32 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Welcome, Rick2! This is a worthy entry to join the group. Reminds me of good ole Roy Orbison....in dreams you're mine....all of the time....we're together...in dreams.
Emmy
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4 posted 07-08-99 06:19 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

I have had fantasies like that,
but they were never what they seemed,
because when morning comes I'm forced to see,
they were nothing BUT a dream...
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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5 posted 07-08-99 06:50 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Well done. In my younger days this dream was all to familiar, but now the dream stands at my side. Thanks for the imagery.
Rick2
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6 posted 07-10-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for Rick2   Email Rick2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rick2

Thank you all for your comments and it seems that more and more every day this dream starts to become a reality. I have many more poems about my beautiful brown eyed girl, I just wish I could share them with her.
azblond
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since 07-01-99
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The Steamy Desert


7 posted 07-10-99 02:48 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I loved this truly I did! It is like the one I wrote last night, same story, different tale. Read mine if you can find it...it is called Awakening...tell me what you think!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
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