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Dreams - I'm new here, please be gentle :-). But honest.

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pyroclastic
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0 posted 07-06-99 09:50 AM       View Profile for pyroclastic   Email pyroclastic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit pyroclastic's Home Page   View IP for pyroclastic

As you sleep, as you dream
Do you feel my body next to you?
When your spirit soars,
When your soul is deep in flight,
Do you see me along side?
As you think of me, do you hear my voice,
Across the distance, calling to you?
When you look in your heart, Do you see me there?
Look deep, look long,
For this is where I reside.
When you feel sad,
Do you take comfort in the love I send?
Companion, friend, confidante,
I am as you need, as you want.
And, if only in our dreams,
Can we share our lives,
Then that will suffice -
For,
Sometimes,
Only in our dreams,
Can we be complete.
© Copyright 1999 pyroclastic - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 07-06-99 09:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

...is always kind...smiles.
Actually this is a good piece of work. It flows nicely and the message is great. I love the last few lines. Looking forward to more!
yumna
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2 posted 07-06-99 06:02 PM       View Profile for yumna   Email yumna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yumna

to be honest.....
i loved it
Balladeer
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3 posted 07-06-99 06:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Alright, if you can handle the truth, here it is ...... the poem is brilliant!
Poet deVine
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Lovely, pyroclastic! Welcome to the family! I look forward to more from you! (May I ask what is the meaning of your UserName?)
pyroclastic
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5 posted 07-07-99 02:12 AM       View Profile for pyroclastic   Email pyroclastic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit pyroclastic's Home Page   View IP for pyroclastic

Hope I did this right, people....Poet Devine?
Pyroclastic is a volcanic thing....pyroclastic flows etc....to everyone else? Thank you - this one was very close to my bones.
DreamEvil
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No need to be gentle, you did that nicely. Not my style but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

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