Dreams - I'm new here, please be gentle :-). But honest.

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Dreams - I'm new here, please be gentle :-). But honest.

pyroclastic
New Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 9
Glasgow, Scotland

0 posted 1999-07-06 09:50 AM

As you sleep, as you dream
Do you feel my body next to you?
When your spirit soars,
When your soul is deep in flight,
Do you see me along side?
As you think of me, do you hear my voice,
Across the distance, calling to you?
When you look in your heart, Do you see me there?
Look deep, look long,
For this is where I reside.
When you feel sad,
Do you take comfort in the love I send?
Companion, friend, confidante,
I am as you need, as you want.
And, if only in our dreams,
Can we share our lives,
Then that will suffice -
For,
Sometimes,
Only in our dreams,
Can we be complete.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-07-06 09:56 AM

...is always kind...smiles.
Actually this is a good piece of work. It flows nicely and the message is great. I love the last few lines. Looking forward to more!

yumna
Junior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 13
alexandria.egypt

2 posted 1999-07-06 06:02 PM

to be honest.....
i loved it

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-07-06 06:45 PM

Alright, if you can handle the truth, here it is ...... the poem is brilliant!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-07-06 11:33 PM

Lovely, pyroclastic! Welcome to the family! I look forward to more from you! (May I ask what is the meaning of your UserName?)

pyroclastic
New Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 9
Glasgow, Scotland

5 posted 1999-07-07 02:12 AM

Hope I did this right, people....Poet Devine?
Pyroclastic is a volcanic thing....pyroclastic flows etc....to everyone else? Thank you - this one was very close to my bones.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

6 posted 1999-07-07 04:55 AM

No need to be gentle, you did that nicely. Not my style but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

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