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Enrique
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since 1999-07-04
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San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-06 09:55 PM


I feel as if I’m dying inside,
And all I can do is think of you,
How I wish to be within your arms,
You could help me make it through,

You are always there for me,
Even with troubles of your own,
It makes me love you even more,
Adding to the greatest love I’ve known,

Even after you broke my heart,
And were carried away by another’s touch,
It caused me to realize how much I love you,
And that same love has been my crutch,

Please don't ever forget these words,
I hope that they will make you see,
How I appreciate you being there,
And just how much you mean to me.

- Enrique

© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-06 10:31 PM


simple, yet elegant. Wonderful.

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*Krista Knutson*

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-07-06 11:21 PM


Definitely written straight from your heart! Lovely poem!
Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona
3 posted 1999-07-07 02:22 AM


I feel the love and romance you have shown,
It also teaches me how much I have grown
To appreciate what you have written
As I read this while relaxing sittin...

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