Glen Hope, PA USA
I really liked the idea on this one...always a day late and a dollar short about sums up my life...LOL
I think I would change the form a bit and a few words to:
I fight with natural instints.
Small battles I so often lose.
I wonder, did I change destiny
with decisions I came to choose.
All dressed up at the great party
and still dancing with my fate.
Did you hear the clock strike final?
Am I again too late?
Just an idea, but it seems to flow a bit more smoothly like this.