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Open Poetry #1

the living creation

r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03

Posts 55
glen easton wv

0 posted 1999-07-04 02:17 AM

love is something that is born into us all.
it is a living creation that God has given
to all of us. it must be nourished,and
nurtured,as it is a living part of every soul.without the proper care, it will die.
just as death is the end of a human life.
the death of love, and human caring is the
end of a human soul.

all to often we hear the phrase fallen in
love. just a phase for infatuation,or a
spark. feelings that emerge from inside from
the dark.

love does't just happen. it is born like a
new born babe on it's first day of life.

just as a tree must have it's roots planted
firmly in earths soil,love must be planted
firmly in our human soul,so it can grow,and
flourish just like the oak.

as sure as a child must crawl before it can
walk.we must grow before we can take the
first steps of loving.
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[This message has been edited by r. baker33 (edited 07-05-99).]

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

1 posted 1999-07-05 01:01 PM

I really like this one. Can you make it longer? Not that it seems unfinished I just would like to read more.

r. baker33
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 55
glen easton wv

2 posted 1999-07-05 04:44 PM

kelly I"ll give it some thought,and give you
an update. Thanks for the feedback.

rbaker33

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

3 posted 1999-07-06 04:05 AM

That is so beautiful. You are very talented. Thanks for answering my request.

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