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speare
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since 06-27-99
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roanoke, texas, usa


0 posted 06-28-99 03:59 AM       View Profile for speare   Email speare   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for speare

my eyes fill with wonder
at the sight of you.
my heart fills with hunger
and i wish you knew.

my legs turn to jelly
whenever you walk by.
my stomach does flips
when you chance to sigh.

i long for your touch
in the warm summer's air.
i reach for your hand
but it's never there.

your face appears
when i close my eyes.
i drop my head
and begin to cry.
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sea_of_okc
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Oklahoma City, OK, USA


1 posted 06-28-99 11:21 AM       View Profile for sea_of_okc   Email sea_of_okc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sea_of_okc

I like your style. Concise but filled with feeling. I could feel the longing in this piece.
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2 posted 06-28-99 11:27 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Seems very familiar to me. Good work!
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