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Forever the Lady

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Dom Mart
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0 posted 09-24-1999 06:55 AM       View Profile for Dom Mart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dom Mart's Home Page   View IP for Dom Mart


She swims at a dignified pace.
Not a drop will splash on her face.
Each of her hairs stays in place.

And then she ascends from the pool
And sits, knees clenched, on a stool
The way she was taught in school.

On occasion she'll indulge in cream pie,
But she keeps her sculpted lips dry
With napkin pats frequent and sly.

She'll satisfy each appetite
With a decorous nibble or bite,
Forever the lady, quite.
© Copyright 1999 Dom Mart - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-26-1999 11:27 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Dom, I just discovered this little gem! Cute!
(I'm still playing catch-up after being gone for almost a week!) I think this has great potential to be one of your best! Perhaps a really hillarious ending? (which I was expecting from you!) What do you think? (I hope I haven't offended you.) Great poem though, as it is. I guess I'm partial to humor! (I wish I could write it!)

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Denise
 
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