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I want to hold you

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Iloveit
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0 posted 09-21-1999 04:24 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

I want to hold you

my mind spins,
with every turn you are there,
I want to hold you

the dishes clank, the suds bubble,
the hot water over flows…
I want to hold you

the vacuum, loudly sings of you,
the dust cloth lingers…suspended in time
I want to hold you

the silky fabric of my night clothes drops easily into place
I climb under the covers and shiver….
I want to hold you

you are there, I am here, I cannot understand,
nothing is right anymore, I need your touch…
I want to hold you


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suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 09-21-1999 05:24 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

You've cried my cry... this time, I ditto you!!!! *G*
Iloveit
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2 posted 09-21-1999 05:34 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

lolol, ok, I deserved that, I think...never been the recipient of a ditto before, and... hey....I kinda like it
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-21-1999 08:04 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Iloveit......seems you mirror many of the passions poets thoughts at this time. A wonderfully written piece of poetry. I understand exactly where you are coming from.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
JTF
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4 posted 09-22-1999 03:58 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

A sad but beautiful poem Lovey ... hang on in there ... SMOOCH !!
Iloveit
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5 posted 09-22-1999 09:40 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks again hoot and JTF loved that colorful smooch ....and yep, I am ok, am hanging in there, well, what else can I do?...if I let go I will fall
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 09-22-1999 10:49 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Well, if you do let go, we'll just have to widen the net to catch you..:-))

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Toerag
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Ala bam a


7 posted 09-22-1999 11:03 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Thank you so much for writing this poem to me.....And since ya did..g'head and hold on for the "ride" of your life sweets.....
Iloveit
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8 posted 09-22-1999 11:23 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

*big grins* love you rainbow girl, you are special

and toe, I hang on pretty good, so ummmm lets ride....well wait a minute, there was that one time I fell off almost got knocked out, and....we are talking about horseback aren't we?
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


9 posted 04-13-2003 11:58 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Iloveit....I can't believe it's been sooo long since I've been through these old blue pages.  Sadly I had forgotten some of my original favorite poets here at Passions.  I'm just digging around the archives tonight.  Enjoying our hidden treasures.
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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