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I want to hold you
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I want to hold you |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
my mind spins, with every turn you are there, I want to hold you the dishes clank, the suds bubble, the hot water over flows… I want to hold you the vacuum, loudly sings of you, the dust cloth lingers…suspended in time I want to hold you the silky fabric of my night clothes drops easily into place I climb under the covers and shiver…. I want to hold you you are there, I am here, I cannot understand, nothing is right anymore, I need your touch… I want to hold you ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've cried my cry... this time, I ditto you!!!! *G* |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
lolol, ok, I deserved that, I think...never been the recipient of a ditto before, and... hey....I kinda like it  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Iloveit......seems you mirror many of the passions poets thoughts at this time. A wonderfully written piece of poetry. I understand exactly where you are coming from. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
A sad but beautiful poem Lovey ... hang on in there ... SMOOCH !! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks again hoot and JTF loved that colorful smooch ....and yep, I am ok, am hanging in there, well, what else can I do?...if I let go I will fall |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Well, if you do let go, we'll just have to widen the net to catch you..:-)) HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thank you so much for writing this poem to me.....And since ya did..g'head and hold on for the "ride" of your life sweets..... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
*big grins* love you rainbow girl, you are special and toe, I hang on pretty good, so ummmm lets ride....well wait a minute, there was that one time I fell off almost got knocked out, and....we are talking about horseback aren't we? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Iloveit....I can't believe it's been sooo long since I've been through these old blue pages. Sadly I had forgotten some of my original favorite poets here at Passions. I'm just digging around the archives tonight. Enjoying our hidden treasures. Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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