This reads beautifully, Dream, with some very fine imagery and overflowing with emotion. Nice work!
------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society
Wow Dream, I sit here in awe that you've now succeeded in making me cry....
I can't even begin to express the pain this made me feel...welcomed it though...I think there are a few of us here who are hurting in this very way...This is only suppose to happen in the springtime! Everyone finding love all at once ! Yet we all sit here staring blankly at the pain we feel without our lovers near us. Thank you kind sir for sharing this....thank you.
------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale