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look but don't touch

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Iloveit
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0 posted 09-08-99 01:16 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

look but don't touch

pretty lady, walking as
if she owns the world
a thing of beauty to behold, but
her protection has grown
entirely too thin.
don't touch
she may fall apart
tears at any moment
should have four glass walls
a barrier from the world
so they can look
but not touch
she is much
too fragile
today

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1999 Iloveit


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Iloveit
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1 posted 09-08-99 01:24 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

help please, this poem is supposed to be centered, but the html that I know is not working, can someone tell me how? thanks
JTF
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2 posted 09-08-99 01:49 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

ooops, you were faster than me HFG ...

and that is another great poem ... and sad ... C&H HUGS

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Iloveit
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3 posted 09-08-99 01:51 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well looks like the 5th time is a charm lol, and JTF, thanks, needed one of those today, you know C&H hugs can penetrate glass without harming the contents don't you?

hugs back

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4 posted 09-08-99 02:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is the first thing of yours I've read and.....Iloveit!! Only good writers can make it look this simple.
Iloveit
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5 posted 09-08-99 02:58 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks balladeer, considering the source,(all my friends here seem to just love you lol), and the poems of yours that I have read, that makes me feel pretty good
 
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