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tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-09-08 10:01 AM

The snow fall's all around us
Whiteness glows from the ground
There are mounds of snow beside the walk
And its still is falling down,
So we cling to each other
With arms wrapped around
Yet the coldness we don't feel,
For inside us burns a fire
Filled with true love passion
A yearning, a desire,
One moment is all it takes
For each of us to see
Wrapped in your arms
Is the place I long to be
Cold winds blow out of the north
Snow swirling in our face
Our breath blowing stem to the air
As we breathe fast and hard,
You hold my face so tenderly
And kiss my pleading lips
As two are one together
A moment I'll not forget

© tori

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.

[This message has been edited by tori (edited 09-08-99).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-09-08 10:24 AM

Wow Tori, this was great! I have missed you posting, I'm glad you're back. Though I am not ready for those cold North winds yet...brr! Great Job!

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 1999-09-08 10:26 AM

Tori, where have you been? Or am I the one who has been "lost?" Really nice poem here - you capture the moment well, I felt as if I were watching the exchange of romance here! My mind has been in another world for quite sometime, you'll have to excuse me if you've been here all along, and I've just failed to comment! I love your work, and was delighted to see you name "pop up" !!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

3 posted 1999-09-08 03:02 PM

Thanks WhtDove and Fatale!!
you have warmed my heart with your wonderful comments.. :-)
I'm not for the cold either WhtDove.. I'm a hot house plant..lol

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