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Starith
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since 08-18-99
Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


0 posted 09-04-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

You see me every day,
Pass me along your way.
But do you really see me there,
Or is that just an empty stare?
For hours we sit and talk,
Sometimes, we take long walks.
Do you really hear,
Or am I speaking to deaf ears?
You know who I am, call me a friend.
But do you really know me, my friend?
When you look into my eyes,
Tell me, what do you see?
Is it a reflection of you ... or one of me?



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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

© Copyright 1999 Starith - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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since 07-18-99
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1 posted 09-04-99 07:56 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Bravo! Can I have a second helping of your work?

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
Posts 1966
Sitting in Michael's Lap


2 posted 09-05-99 02:03 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

What a poem! This is great ... good rhyme, and a powerful message ... bravo, encore!

Back to the top where it belongs!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


Starith
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since 08-18-99
Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


3 posted 09-05-99 02:25 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Thank you!

Sax: I do have other posting they have been pushed backed because of new postings, and I plan to post more of my work as I feel the urge. I'm very glad you liked it.

Nocht: Thanks for pushing me back to the top. I'm glad you think my work is good enough for a second look.

Starith

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 09-05-99 04:57 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written. I'm glad I took a second look at this piece. BRAVO!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Starith
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Leesburg, FL USA


5 posted 09-05-99 10:17 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Hoot I am honored to have received such high praise from a poet such as yourself...thank you.

Starith

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caroline
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6 posted 09-05-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Excellent, indeed.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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7 posted 09-05-99 10:30 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Like, like, like!! Very well done, Starith.
Starith
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Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


8 posted 09-06-99 05:01 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Thank you for your high praise...I'm glad you appreciated my poem.

Star

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moonmoon
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since 08-13-99
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TX , USA


9 posted 09-06-99 05:43 PM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon


Very well written Starith...It flowed right through..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


10 posted 11-14-2003 12:14 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

These are very honest thoughts that I believe we all ponder.....
Wow!!!  To go back through these old blue pages!!!  It's amazing how the time flies by too quickly anymore!!!!
Hope you are well!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

 
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