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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
My heart beats wildly against my breast; feeling as though it will burst at any moment, as you draw nearer to my side. Alas! My heart beats with the joy and the overpowering love which it holds for you! I live for you, you are my life and without you I cannot live. For without you my heart will cease to beat. I awaken daily to the warm rays of the glowing sun to start each day anew. I have beautiful memories of our love to carry with me through time. Oh how I do love you! I wish to journey through life with you. Daring new challenges and finding as each day passes that there is something new and wonderful learned about one another. We are seperate in body yet our hearts are united to unfold into one blossoming love. Alas! My heart beats with the joy and the overpowering love with it holds for you! 11/26/94 |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
I liked this one childomine. The writing style was alluring, the heartbeat and the love could almost be felt. Brought a smile to my face as I thought about one I love.. Good piece, much enjoyed.  A writer's soul is on paper etched. In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very heartfelt, and it would almost make a good free verse poem...  |
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