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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2021-01-04 08:37 PM


The tired fogs rise from Dan Francisco,
White as electric filaments,
In one night, still weary,
The fog threatens us
The lights are hanging,
To extreme feelings
Like the horns of a bull,
Must our loves go away
For us to regret them?

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (01-05-2021 09:47 AM).]

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1 posted 2021-04-22 07:07 AM


Unfortunately, sometimes they must. Sighing at this. Your scene is sad but soft and dreamlike.  Enjoyed!

"I know this love will tear me to pieces
I know his hands will dig up my secrets"

Meg Myers


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