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The Gear Of The Gorton Fisherman: A Pound Of Prevention Worth An Ounce Of Vows...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 01-20-2018 02:21 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Baby, your words fall like rain collecting in shallow puddles
and made dirty by the earth as they turn it to mud
...only to evaporate and fall again

I have no time or need of time
No patience, no money, no food or love
...and I no longer feel any hunger

But your words rain down all around me, baby,
making me feel so dirty, only to evaporate
...and fall again

...and again


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 01-20-2018 04:34 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I like this. It is a little off beat like jazz. ~L
Poet In Pink
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2 posted 01-20-2018 07:16 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Your words are ~ Sad yet hopeful all at the same time...An emotionally charged write Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 01-21-2018 04:45 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Some jazz does conjure up or relate to feelings in this way, Miss Lori. That's cool of you to think of it that way. Thanks...

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 01-21-2018 04:49 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I'm always pleased to hear your take on what I write, Miss Pinky. We're a small crowd here, aren't we...but you make it feel big and bustling with your sparkling presence.  

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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