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Rick
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0 posted 2017-07-30 07:45 AM



Screaming words silent
The inner voice exhausted
Some thoughts require sound

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-07-30 11:21 AM


I hear you...the lack of sound notwithstanding. I even saw some visuals in the quiet setting of your mind.  

I always enjoy reading you Rick.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2017-07-30 02:23 PM


Ab-so-lutely, Rick, the written word is first rate, but when read aloud the sounds and feelings of the poet is magical.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
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3 posted 2017-07-30 10:43 PM


So true - so true.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2017-07-31 05:40 AM


Rick
Ditto all of the above! ~L

LeeJ
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5 posted 2017-07-31 06:51 AM


had to chuckle while reading this, as I am so very vocal, and those screaming words of mine always seem to surface...glad to read, you don't have my vices....thought provoking write.  
Rick
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6 posted 2017-07-31 07:03 PM


Thank you everyone for your comments, always great to come back and see you all here, I hope to stay for a while 🙂
Cerulean
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7 posted 2017-07-31 07:54 PM


That's especially true for introverts. Lol.

Try telling that to an extrovert, who often lives on the surface (can't remember the exact saying). You see my point.

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