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Open Poetry #50

what i think

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-06-20 09:19 PM

You do not need to know
Of what I think,
A kiss calms down everybody,
You do not need to love me,
A bed answers your caresses
And we can rest there,
You do not need to know
Which kind of animal I am,
A bear, a donkey, or a gull,
Rather let me look at the sea,
Of what I think is written there.

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2017-06-21 08:44 AM

A lot of trust, acceptance is all that's
needed to make right a relationship

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2017-06-22 02:55 PM

Very thoughtful poem.
Really enjoyed the sentiment.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2017-06-22 10:08 PM

enjoyed...james

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

4 posted 2017-06-22 10:35 PM

Wonderful sentiments Yann Much enjoyed reading ~ Alana

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2017-06-24 10:21 AM

thanks jjote for the cery true and precious comment
yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2017-06-24 10:22 AM

thanks blue serenade

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2017-06-24 10:23 AM

thanks james

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2017-06-24 10:24 AM

thanks poet in pink, a so nice comment for me

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2017-06-25 08:46 PM

especially fine ending lines ! ...

"... let me look at the sea,
Of what I think is written there."

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