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CastleGuard
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we were young
her tresses reached to her waist
she wielded them
mercilessly
and I, thus tethered,
under her spell remained -
when at last
unravelled
across my cheek they fell
the flame-tips ignited dreams
I dare not tell...

CG
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Hello CG A sweet write ~ I say Tell!!! Tell!!!  I double dog dare you!!!  ha ha ~ Enjoyed muchers ~ Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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CG,
Way to go, nice write! ~L
CastleGuard
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Thank you for the read and the dare, Alana, but this is a General forum, after all.....lol.

CG
CastleGuard
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Thank you Lori for the read and the kind reply.

CG
JerryPat2
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Ahhh . . . A sweet teasing bit of poetry for us to drool over. Heh.Heh I don't blame you for not "tellin'."

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

CastleGuard
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Thanks for stopping by, Jerry and commenting.
Teasing is appeasing....lol.

CG
 
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