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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2017-06-13 07:06 PM


I like the girls
Who put back fishes in the water,
They take forward the world.

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-06-13 07:19 PM


Nicely done, Yann. 'Course I like for them to save a couple for the frying pan. Satisfying, don't ya know?

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2017-06-13 08:14 PM


Hi Jerry,naturally we have to feed our stomachs too, but souls are more important, and girls seem to know ,

yann

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
3 posted 2017-06-13 09:29 PM


A fun read! Lots to read in, for sure.

One could ponder old adages:
"Like a fish out of the water"
"Make them fishers of men"
"there are more than on fish in the sea"

Very much enjoyed the few well chosen words

              ~misC

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2017-06-13 09:54 PM


nice...james
Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-06-13 11:00 PM


Hello Yann Much enjoyed your food for thought ~ Alana
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