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Open Poetry #50

Five Angels in a Row

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2017-06-13 07:32 PM

The amazing true story of the five women that I fell in love with, from age 13 to, just a few years ago, age 34. Enjoy.
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Five Angels in a Row

Stephanie,
in memory green
no matter how many years pass
your brown eyes unveil in me
sweetest scents of the past

Jennifer,
I'll always remember
that night when I turned eighteen
we explored each other
ah, young love is a beautiful thing

Beth Ann,
you spirit always ran
like wildfire in my bones
someday I will understand
the light your heart always shone

Sarah,
were you aware of
my deep secret desire
your smile bright as the sun
fueled my creativity fire

Aryana,
are you gonna
be the one true love for me
at the end of the day honey
your eyes are all I want to see

Five angels,
five gorgeous women
all in a row
all have left a mark forever on this man
and I'm grateful I got to know
the soft lightness of love in brilliant hues
shining inside my heart for each and every one of you
and I'll carry it on
until my dying day
yeah I'll sing to you in song
until my dying day

"Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-06-13 08:54 PM

Sweet! Sweet!! SWEET!!!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2017-06-13 09:23 PM

I agree.  Love this, love this.
Really liked "the soft lightness of love"
          ~miscellanea
I believe your poem can be an inspiration to springboard many more. Bring them on.

      ~miscellanea`

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2017-06-13 09:52 PM

very nice...james

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

4 posted 2017-06-13 11:03 PM

Great tribute to each one SD Sounds like your life was richer for knowing each of them ~ Enjoyed ~ Alana

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