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Night_Owl
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0 posted 2017-05-26 05:06 PM


Taken away by the illness within
wish I had another moment.
Having a hard time believing you have passed;
how do I accept the loss of my friend?

I will miss the loud knocking on my front door
when you would stop by on the slightest whim.
You whirled me away like a hurricane;
with only a moment's notice, our wanderings began.

Whether we hopped into your car to do some errands
or spend the day with friends,
a day with you was quite the adventure;
of which I dearly miss.

I still remember when we first met;
two hours after midnight sitting on my porch.
You threw a rock to scare a skunk
I told you to stop; he was doing no harm.

As you walked toward me, I felt intimidated;
your stature could match any man.
The concern I felt was for naught;
for you had a pleasant disposition.

It was wrong you did admit
and promised you would never throw another.
You kept that promise you made to me;
as well the ones thereafter.

Not for a moment did I think we would become friends;
nothing in common there was between us.
Unaware that a friendship was forming;
from that fateful night, you followed a skunk.

© Copyright 2017 Judy Cennami - All Rights Reserved
P.U Stinkenbaum
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1 posted 2017-05-26 05:15 PM


quote:
"Not for a moment did I think we would become friends;
nothing in common there was between us.
Unaware that a friendship was forming;
from that fateful night, you followed a skunk"
Sums up your poetry and your homage to your friend with dignity, fondness and love.

'...a friend indeed'.


Just out looking for the real me...

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2017-05-26 07:27 PM


Beautiful letter to Tracy...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2017-05-26 08:29 PM


You reminded me of my friend I lost decades ago. I thank you so much for the memory. Your words were like a fresh washed face and bare feet. That's a compliment I hope that makes sense. You are fresh, open, sweet and
authentic. Write on! ~L

Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-05-27 12:54 PM


Hello Judy   Such a beautifully brushed tribute to your friend  ~ So very sorry for your loss. I'm happy to hear that you have lots of good memories, those are what gets us through. Alana
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5 posted 2017-05-27 10:34 AM


Dear Owly One,

My heart reaches out to hug your heart. Again, I am moved by your sensitivity and your ability to move me so deeply. You will remain in my thoughts today.

With love ~ Ali

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