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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 05-18-2017 05:42 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet In Pink





I want to be your butterfly
please unfurl me from my cocoon
tenderly release my passion
beneath the light of summers moon

Loose my spirit send it soaring
watch as my wings fly ever free
wrap me up within your heart~strings
bequeath your precious love to me

Journey with me to loves pure bliss
laying aside all of our pain
lets venture into happiness
it's time to leave behind the rain

Fill my soul with your sweet essence
on the painted wings of morrow
let us join together as one
casting away all our sorrow

Do you dare take up wings and fly
do you favor a brand new start
if the answer is truly yes
then simply take flight with my heart

Poet In Pink



[This message has been edited by Poet In Pink (05-18-2017 11:26 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 05-18-2017 07:10 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

wonderful display of talent...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 05-18-2017 07:58 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Warm, tender and romantic.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 05-18-2017 09:44 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I'm with him, "warm, tender and romantic" and I must add, positively pink! First time I ever read a poem that felt pink. More than ink deep. ~L
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4 posted 05-18-2017 10:12 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

wonderful words, like a "spring tune", and life "rebounds"
yann
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Thank you for the read James   Appreciate your kind words ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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Thank you for dropping by Bluesy   Appreciate your kind comment ~ Alana
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Thank you Lori for the sweet comment That is the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me ~ Alana
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Thank you kindly Yann for the read & kind reply
miscellanea
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9 posted 05-18-2017 11:30 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

Glad I took flight over to your post of pink.
Your poem moves me with momentum and makes me feel like I am taking flight, a romantic carpet-ride-like-flight. Nice job. Your rhyme scheme seemed effortless, too.

Much enjoyed!
   ~misc~
miscellanea
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BTW, great first post!
Welcome!

     ~misc
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jwesley
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11 posted 05-19-2017 11:33 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

I don't believe I've ever seen Pink look more beautiful, my friend - everything within this piece was in perfect Hue.

Much enjoyed,

j.
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12 posted 05-19-2017 12:37 PM       View Profile for soul drifter   Email soul drifter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for soul drifter

Greetings and welcome to pip! Great writing here, a wonderful natural flow of words, it all comes together beautifully. Looking forward to more from you in the future.

"Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon

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Thank you Misc for the welcome and your kind words ~ Much appreciate you taking the time to read ~ Alana
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Thank you James ever so much for your sweet comment ~ Appreciate your time   Alana
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Thank you kindly Soul Drifter Appreciate the welcome and nice comments ~ Alana
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An lovely invitation in each stanza. I accept.

What must I do from here Pinkie, start flapping my wings?  


Just out looking for the real me...
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17 posted 05-19-2017 10:32 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Pink... Tender thoughts. Enjoyed...Paul
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So kind of you to stop by Stinkie Your reply has me giggling like a school girl  lol  Nice to know you are all fired up about accepting...But one never rushes into these things ~ After all I don't even know you yet! lol  I suppose you could start by standing on one foot and flapping   Thanks for your fun response ~ Pinkie
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Pleased to meet you Paul Thank you for dropping by to read & your kind comment ~ Alana
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20 posted 05-19-2017 11:06 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

finely pure Romanticism !

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Thank you for stopping in to read Dream Poet   Alana
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You are indeed my poet in pink from PC, and your poetry is as lovely as ever...Keith.

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Hello dear Keith I Thank you for the read and kind words ~ I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry ~ Alana
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Beautiful, dreamy, romantic.

Had to bring it back up.

CG
 
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