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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-04-16 09:21 PM

It is you, the girl that we want,
The most beautiful of the avenue,
The one who offers the paradise,
Who likes the misunderstandings.

You understand everything, and nothing
Which not comes from your loins,
You make up with night,
To seduce all which laughs.

To love, you run away,
Far from all those that you curse,
You frighten the passers-by,
When you speak back slang.

It is you, the girl that we want,
Pleased scholar of the street,
The one who knows how to offer the time
In we, wandering ignorants..

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-04-16 09:27 PM

That's pretty profound Yann. ~L

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2017-04-16 09:54 PM

Thanks a lot lori,

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

3 posted 2017-04-16 10:50 PM

quote:
"It is you, the girl that we want,
Pleased scholar of the street,
The one who knows how to offer the time

Yes, she's the one alright yann...I think I've known her.

Your definitive pen makes her come alive in every line. Very well written.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2017-04-18 09:52 PM

nice writing 2islander2...james

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2017-04-18 09:58 PM

thanks PU, this is a kind of gal we never forget, i am glad to know her, you too,I think
yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2017-04-18 09:58 PM

thanks james

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2017-04-19 05:29 PM

I like her.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2017-04-19 09:02 PM

me too, thanks alison

yann

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2017-04-20 06:22 AM

she sounds extremely confident. Wonderful write

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

10 posted 2017-05-18 01:07 AM

I agree.  Pretty profound!
              Much enjoyed,
                `misc`

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2017-05-18 10:22 AM

I agree with all the above, my friend . . . well done!!

j.

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