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2islander2
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0 posted 04-16-2017 09:21 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for 2islander2


It is you, the girl that we want,
The most beautiful of the avenue,
The one who offers the paradise,
Who likes the misunderstandings.

You understand everything, and nothing
Which not comes from your loins,
You make up with night,
To seduce all which laughs.

To love, you run away,
Far from all those that you curse,
You frighten the passers-by,
When you speak back slang.

It is you, the girl that we want,
Pleased scholar of the street,
The one who knows how to offer the time
In we, wandering ignorants..
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 04-16-2017 09:27 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

That's pretty profound Yann. ~L
2islander2
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2 posted 04-16-2017 09:54 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Thanks a lot lori,
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3 posted 04-16-2017 10:50 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

quote:
"It is you, the girl that we want,
Pleased scholar of the street,
The one who knows how to offer the time
Yes, she's the one alright yann...I think I've known her.

Your definitive pen makes her come alive in every line. Very well written.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JamesMichael
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4 posted 04-18-2017 09:52 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

nice writing 2islander2...james
2islander2
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5 posted 04-18-2017 09:58 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks PU,  this is a kind of gal we never forget, i am glad to know her, you too,I think
yann
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thanks james
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I like her.
2islander2
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8 posted 04-19-2017 09:02 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

me too, thanks alison


yann
LeeJ
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she sounds extremely confident.  Wonderful write
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10 posted 05-18-2017 01:07 AM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

I agree.  Pretty profound!
              Much enjoyed,
                `misc`
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I agree with all the above, my friend . . . well done!!


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