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Timeless Stars
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Arms right here await to enfold you in deepest love, within my soul through ages past present and future, wind blown words whisper and echo on the fresh breeze, warmly I welcome you back into my golden silken dreams. To dream with you, to heart share love, to leave roses by the graveside of eternity, while our love forges on, is but a thought through the vastness of universal time. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"to leave roses by the graveside of eternity," Outstanding two lines. They say everything which needs to be said. A perfect accompaniment to this jewel of a poem. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...james |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hmmm yea..love is all that. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand-fine Romanticism !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful romantic poetry. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
applause...I very much enjoyed your timeless poem. Thanks, misc- |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you GoldenRose ~ Your poem comes to life with love and devotion flowing through it. So tenderly brushed ~ Much enjoyed my read and look forward to more from your pen. |
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