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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2017-03-12 05:39 PM



Oh my precious P L T
You have no idea
Just how much you mean to me ...

You are my world, my Stars & Sun
And without you by my side
I'd not want another day to come....

Yes we fight like Dog and Cat
Unfortunate, but we know  this to be  true
But one of us always comes back
Either you to me or I to you.....

So as we both know this will always be
And we'll continue to give us another chance
Don't you we think we should agree
That the next time we want to argue,

We should just shut up and dance* ?

* Colloquially speaking that is... 😉
 

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-03-12 09:32 PM


Perfect!!  Oh, and how I can relate.

True to life fun poem.  

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2017-03-13 05:32 AM


Thank you. Its a love / Hate Relationship so we decided to just shut up and dance! Glad you enjoyed it
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2017-03-13 05:47 AM


Glad you enjoyed it, the love/ hate relationship makes the bond so much stronger. Perhaos I  should explain that  P L T is my " Precious Little Tyke. Thanks for the comment

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2017-03-14 07:33 AM


Great to see you hear again effjayel. Touching poem.


effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
5 posted 2017-03-16 12:21 PM


Ida you remind me so much of my maternal grandmother with whom i shared the same birthday.  She was a game old Irish lady and had a sister in America called Ida. Granny...is that you?  😉 x

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

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