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effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity


0 posted 03-12-2017 05:39 PM       View Profile for effjayel   Email effjayel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for effjayel


Oh my precious P L T
You have no idea
Just how much you mean to me ...

You are my world, my Stars & Sun
And without you by my side
I'd not want another day to come....

Yes we fight like Dog and Cat
Unfortunate, but we know  this to be  true
But one of us always comes back
Either you to me or I to you.....

So as we both know this will always be
And we'll continue to give us another chance
Don't you we think we should agree
That the next time we want to argue,

We should just shut up and dance* ?

* Colloquially speaking that is... 😉
 

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

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BluesSerenade
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since 10-23-2001
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By the Seaside


1 posted 03-12-2017 09:32 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Perfect!!  Oh, and how I can relate.

True to life fun poem.  
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity


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Thank you. Its a love / Hate Relationship so we decided to just shut up and dance! Glad you enjoyed it
effjayel
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3 posted 03-13-2017 05:47 AM       View Profile for effjayel   Email effjayel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for effjayel

Glad you enjoyed it, the love/ hate relationship makes the bond so much stronger. Perhaos I  should explain that  P L T is my " Precious Little Tyke. Thanks for the comment

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California


4 posted 03-14-2017 07:33 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Great to see you hear again effjayel. Touching poem.

effjayel
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5 posted 03-16-2017 12:21 PM       View Profile for effjayel   Email effjayel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for effjayel

Ida you remind me so much of my maternal grandmother with whom i shared the same birthday.  She was a game old Irish lady and had a sister in America called Ida. Granny...is that you?  😉 x

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

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