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The Thought Of Falling In Love

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 02-15-2017 07:17 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

It took me awhile
to know the difference
between her painted smile
and her self assurance
After all,
I was falling in love

The way we met,
our eyes fixated,
looking back
I should have waited,
but then one touch
and I was baited
After all,
I was falling in love

How long those warm
summer breezes blew
from across the bay into her room
where our passions played
with our hearts renewed
After all,
we were falling in love

Still, it took me awhile
to know the difference
between her love
and my assurance,
that I,
had fallen in love

...just bein' Bluesy

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 02-15-2017 08:19 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Eh . . . It happens quite frequently, Bluesy, that two people can fall in love with one another and have different degrees of "falling in love." One is held very deep within the one, while the other may have just fallen in love with falling in love.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 02-15-2017 09:52 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Precisely Sir!

Many thanks JerryPat.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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3 posted 02-15-2017 11:00 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

I'm giving serious thought to leaving this site completely.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 02-15-2017 11:18 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

It's always been an odd little place. It was when I got here and it will be when I leave...again. You've certainly put you're all into it and we both will do as we wish, to be sure.

Always my best to you JerryPat, whatever you choose.

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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5 posted 02-16-2017 10:41 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Hi Bluesy, i can think this is the best way to be sure of loving someone, to care also about truth, your words are signifiant and pleasant,

have a good day


yann
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a 'Universalist' !


6 posted 02-16-2017 02:21 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

a fine and thoughtful 'write!'
JamesMichael
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7 posted 02-16-2017 04:27 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

its funny how a touch seems to make the words come out easier...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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8 posted 02-26-2017 01:33 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you yann...be well.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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9 posted 02-26-2017 01:34 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Always appreciate your visits Bruce. Many thanks.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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10 posted 02-26-2017 01:35 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you for your comment James.

...just bein' Bluesy

Alison
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11 posted 06-07-2017 03:14 PM       View Profile for Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Love!  The highs of heightened senses -- and the lows of inner turmoil. I liked this, Bluesy.

A
jwesley
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12 posted 06-08-2017 01:46 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Nothing new from here, my friend, I agree with all the comments above.

j.
Paul Wilson
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13 posted 06-08-2017 04:48 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Bluesy... It's like the old saying, " When Love finds you there ain't no use trying to hide" Enjoyed... Paul
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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14 posted 06-08-2017 09:54 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I'm glad this little gem got bounced back up to the top and I read it! Very nice! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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15 posted 06-09-2017 11:41 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you so much Alison. I'm so glad you're more active here in open. This forum needs you.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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16 posted 06-09-2017 11:42 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

S'okay j! Happy to have you reading.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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17 posted 06-09-2017 11:43 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you so much Paul. Good to see you about the place!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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18 posted 06-09-2017 11:44 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you Miss Lori. You're the "gem" around here!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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