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Open Poetry #49

all has to be accepted

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2016-02-18 02:59 AM

For scratching our dreams,
For kissing too nice girls,
What could we do ?
All has to be accepted,

For freezing the time,
For writing sad loves,
What could we do ?
All has to be accepted,

For losing our time,
For inventing therapy,
What could we do ?
Just writing true poetry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-02-18 07:18 AM

Very nice thoughts transferred into words.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2016-02-19 07:58 PM

nice writing...james

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2016-02-19 10:04 PM

thanks Jerry and james, for reading kindly and commenting

gave a nice day

yann

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2016-02-20 10:39 AM

Very nice indeed Yann!

True words and nice escape....Loved it.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2016-02-22 12:15 PM

"Scratching our dreams". Love.

A

2islander2
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by the sea

6 posted 2016-02-22 12:26 PM

thanks ethome tor the nice words,

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

7 posted 2016-02-22 12:27 PM

Thanks alison, i am glad to hear about you

yann

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2016-02-24 04:40 AM

Yes I'm afraid our while life is acceptance, yann. What we're here to learn I guess.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

9 posted 2016-02-24 11:05 AM

thanks ida, this is so true, but it doesn't mean that we can't be happy with

yann

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