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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2016-02-22 12:39 PM



Elvis was the one
Took that night train to Memphis
Baby let's play house

©February 5, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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rainyday
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1 posted 2016-02-22 09:07 PM


JP, Enjoyed your Elvis-Haiku,
I got to see him once in concert..near the end
of his life, still a great show..I'll never forget it.

J

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2016-02-22 09:22 PM


We had heard about him, but he wasn't famous yet. He played in an open air concert in a town not far from where I lived. I saw him there and was instantly a fan. I also looked around at the girls in that audience, not one of them would have hesitated to shed their clothes if that man had asked them to. Us guys tried to not like him because of the way the girls acted about him. We couldn't. He was just too darn good. Thank you for commenting, rainy.

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Cari
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3 posted 2016-02-24 10:58 AM


More of a Dylan fan myself though Elvis was the better singer but then most were. Still when Dylan opened his mouth you still had to listen.
Nothing like the old ones is there mate.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-02-24 11:09 AM


Ahhh . . . Cari, I hear you on Dylan, and yes, his voice wasn't that great, but who cared when you listened to the words of his songs. Appreciate you being here today . . .

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