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whitbypoet1
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since 2014-09-02
Posts 40


0 posted 2015-03-11 07:11 AM


I have been here before
I just cant think of when,
I remember the desk
And the paper and pen,
The words are all written
The way I recall,
Like windows of light
Shining into the hall,
On their way to a room
Where the sun never goes,
Where the night never sleeps
And the day never knows,
As they look for the hand
That gave life to their song,
When the shadows of truth
Were so vivid and long,
Where the vespers of summer
And winter collide,
Till before very long
There is nowhere to hide,
Until poetry fades
Like the paint on a wall,
Until no-one can hear
When the fading rhymes call,
And all that I know
Is Ive been here before,
I remember the words
And the tightly locked door...


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-03-11 07:15 AM


This one touched me whitbypoet1. I also relate very much to your well crafted thoughts . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2015-03-11 07:47 AM


Where the vespers of summer
And winter collide,
Till before very long
There is nowhere to hide,


an opening of awareness, and yes, we've all been there before, unfortunately, some just cannot seem to remember.  Penned with wonderful description....and rhyme.

jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2015-03-11 09:01 AM


dejavu..I also remember waking up thinking I've dreamt that dream before..just can't recall details.  enjoyed this

whitbypoet1
Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40

4 posted 2015-03-12 04:57 PM


Thank you for the replies...Keith.
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2015-03-13 04:06 PM


Keith,Very nice, enjoyed. JO
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2015-03-14 06:40 PM


Enjoyed every word of this very much indeed.  I can feel the power of the dénouement in that last line, and its enigma adds to its power.  

Owl

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