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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Sea; I just shoot your modern pages, And your flying fish challenge my pen, Sailboats draw themselves rhymes, I join you, among the big poems. Sea, you are quiet, I am in love, Your storms are the most subtle dictionaries, Your paper heavier than the sky Lies down as a dizzy woman.. Sea, it is necessary here, to write it in colors, You are more vast than my imagination, Deeper than an unhappy love affair, You are the book which never finishes … |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Fantastic poem, dear Yann! I immersed in your Sea vision and felt what you so masterfully expressed. Ahhh, the Sea has inspired you beautifully. I will save this to enjoy it again. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery ! |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
by the sea is such an inspiring place to write a poem..you got it right on |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you pargherita, your words indeed are a fine tribute to mother sea, and to poetry, sea inspires lme a lot of poetry, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks bruce for the kind comment yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jjote for the lovly comment, liked it yann |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
superb write - really enjoyed it. Love is the life of the soul... |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Superb is right. The sea is a metaphor or just as a visual in writing that I'm particularly partial to. Exceptional stuff here. And here I thought nothing is more vast than imagination...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
you do remind how the sea is surely a cauldron of inspiration and wonder for the poet |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I have to say, I would never have thought of doing it this way. This is original, and I like it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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